Six Sentence Sunday No. 4

Wow. With this weekend’s entry, I’ve completed a month of Six Sentence Sunday offerings.

Let’s see if I can end the month with a bang, shall we? These six sentences pick up after Mel watches Dave tuck their daughter in and read her a bedtime story, so she’s feeling pretty warm and fuzzy toward him.

My six:

When he reached out to brush her hair off her face, Mel reared back. “What do you think you’re doing?”

Dave’s grin flickered on in full force, and something else melted inside her. “Renewing our acquaintance.”

There had to be something wrong with that idea, but with him looking at her like that, Mel had no idea what it was. As she leaned into him, her lips parted, already begging for a kiss.


Posted

in

by

Comments

2 responses to “Six Sentence Sunday No. 4”

  1. Karla Doyle Avatar

    Hi, Arlene 🙂 Hope you’re enjoying Six Sentence Sunday.

    Great job getting her mixed emotions across in this snippet!

  2. binance anm"alan Avatar

    Thank you for your sharing. I am worried that I lack creative ideas. It is your article that makes me full of hope. Thank you. But, I have a question, can you help me?

Leave a Reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *